All lined up in my sights
my little duckies in a row
a dozen windows open all at once
and then at last I’m home
fading red wine melancholy
paired with your sacred text
my evening hums with electricity
as I bathe in your eccentricities
discovering and recovering
aspects long lost, now resurfacing
or carefully concealed, re-emerging
fragments I once discarded
re-birthed in wanton laughter
your songs are a lullaby to my soul.
Greedy as a starving dog
I consume your musical words
graceless in my unrestrained gluttony
your glorious expression surpassing me
your clever deceptions delighting me
you lead me along the garden path
you get me higher than heaven itself
and for all the hours I should have slept
I would make your poetry my gentle bed
comforting myself within your essence
your thoughts become my convalescence
and with your loving holy hands
and your blessed, messy, crazy heads
you wrote me out of hell.
Loved the piece!! Especially the lines, “you get me higher than heaven itself” and “you wrote me out of hell.” ❤
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Thank you, and I’m glad those lines worked. 🙂
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This is amazing… Beautifully done ❤ ❤ ❤
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Many thanks for your thoughts 🙂
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Start to finish and all in between, quite quite wonderful! 🌷
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Many thanks indeed! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Vijayagiri views.
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Thanks mate!
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So incredible 🙂 well done. This is very beautiful. You write me out of hell my friend 🙂
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Too kind! But always appreciated. 🙂
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🙂 it’s true ! Enjoy the rest of your weekend !
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Brilliant, Amazing, all things wonderful ❤️❤️❤️
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This is so good… I commented twice 🙂
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I am humbled. 🙂 Thank you doubly.
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Amazing 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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