Fumbling picking with prickly fingers
chords that jangle when they should chime
callous growth and my forlorn hopes
I’ll make these cliches dance in time
a worn-out phrase born from naivete
climbing chaos like a jungle-gym
can’t persuade myself to save myself
wandering hands play a lonely hymn
reveal yourself to me
with your melodic screed
crows strung along a telephone wire
reaching heights I couldn’t aspire
summoning crumbs
twiddling thumbs
someone’s gotta feed these chickens.
Your rhythm here was melodic, it just flowed.
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many thanks 🙂
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Climbing chaos like a jungle gym. I love this line . I also love the flow of this one ! So good !
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Cheers Brittny!
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Cheers!! 🙂 🥂
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